Alda Vismally

Characters Full Name: Alda Vismally
Age: 14
DoB: 19 Dec 1996
Gender: Female
Special Position: N/A


Looks: She had long dark hair, a thin face, lean body, and useless braces. She has olive skin and dark eyes that are a little to far apart fro here liking.Short, very short, about 5'1. She got her average pimple every now and then, but she's isn't one to focus on looks. she's proud of her intelligence, looks couldn't mean less. She constantly has she nose in the air to look down and belittle people even though she is shorter than most of the people she knows.

Personality: readily relies on logic, acts as the voice of reason, reluctant to break rules, not afraid to stand up to her friends when she thinks it is in their best interests, bossy & sort of a know-it-all. strong social conscience, tenacity,extremely intelligent and hard-working,compassion, loyal, her confidence hides her insecurities, great fear of failure, mild panic in the face of sudden danger, argumentative, blunt with her opinions, tends to belittle people.

Power: Intangibility [ability to phase through solid matter without harm], the minute she touches an object she can pass through it, or she can even make it intangible. Sometimes she cannot control it, she often slips through the floor, or when she is trying to be intangible, it doesn't work. But with practice, she can be very powerful. with her., 2 bar.

Weapons: none! she hates violence

History: Youngest of 5 children, not used to getting a lot of attention. She attended an expensive private school, but her family is not very rich. She was there on a scholarship. She wasn't very popular in that school or her old school. In her old school people thought that she was stuck up simply because she was smarter than everyone else, and in her new school that didn't want to talk to some one 'poor'.

a passive character this is a first

Well one thing that needs adressing is you can only have one power. I myself would prefer intangibility but thats just my opinion. Make sure you write your powers limits and how youuse your hands to do it (for example, laying your hands on it first and then the rest of your body follows) Also your account name needs to change to Ilda Vismally so i can change thatwhen you are online.

Do that and this wil be aprroved.

Sorry, while I wrote this I was kind of watching Danny Phantom, and I remembered the part in the theme song where it goes "he can walk through walls, disappear and fly" and I suddenly decided I wanted my power to be like him. Expect the flying, that's to sci-fi for me >< LOL .

Lol Danny Phantom Rocks!

And sorry about the delay. Without further ado:

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